Final T's Correction of Informal Letter 1 by D.Ristovski

Danilo, you must paragraph your writing.

Dear Jo,

I’m delighted that you’re coming to visit us. It’s taken a long time since I was in your beautiful country. I can imagine how hot it is down there - perfect weather for swimming and sunbathing in the clean azure sea.

Now, I have some obligations on March 14th, but I think I will have some free time to meet you at the airport. If I don’t come, I’ll tell my friend to meet you at 16.00. He has very long, curly, black hair and he’ll be wearing a blue and white jacket.

And, in the end, something about the presents. I hope this will not be very selfish and unkind from me. You’ll surprise my parents if you give them these presents: for my mom, a T- shirt with an incription printed on it (for example it can be the name of your country or some famous actor from Australia); for my dad some music records (jazz or opera), if it’s not expensive; for my younger brother a kangaroo toy; and for me.. it’s your choice, but if you don’t have an idea - a book of Australia with pictures in colour.

Thank you for everything, and see you soon!

Yours,
Danilo