1st T's Correction of Formal Letter 1 by D. Ristovski

Dear Mr Filth,
In your offer you told that you need some students who know English very well. I think I can improve my English in this camp.
I study English for 15 years in Lingva, private school, witch is a member of YALS. Teachers from school told me that I have exellent knowledge of English and that I can work at an American summer camp for children. I have some experience with young children under the age of 12. When I was on some Explorers expedition for children witch are students in primary schools in Valjevo. I was ellected for a guide when we where on highest point of Durmitor (2535 meters). Everyone where happy and proud of me because it was very hard to keep them.
I was in the music school for six years, so I can tell the children what is interesting for them, what kind of music is good for them. Also my basketball team was 2nd in Yugoslavia on competition in Belgrade, so I can show them some trics in this sport.
If you call me , I think you will be saticfide with me …


Your faithfully,
Danilo