1st T's Correction of Formal Letter 1 by K.Pavlovic

Dear Mr or Mrs,

I am interested in the summer jobs that are available in your agency. I would like to do this because I like that job. Also I have knowledge in that kind of work. I have worked in two tourist agencies:Touring and National as a tourist guide.Three years ago I have had my own agency in Italy. I used to live there.That means that I know italian very well. And my english is very good. I have been learning english for 8 years and I have First Certificate. I didn’t mention that I have worked with older people in many spas in Serbia.I traveled all around world. I visited Greece, Spain, Australia,Egypt, Germany, USA and many others. If I get this job I will take my group to see interesting historic places.For example: Kalemegdan in Belgrade, Petrovaradin in Novi Sad, Kadinjaca....And last day of visitng I will show them Valjevo.
I would be very aprishiated if I get the job

Your faigtfully,
Pavlovic Katarina