Final T's Correction of Informal Letter 1 by K.Pavlovic

Final T’s Correction of Informal Letter 1 by K.Pavlovic

Kaca, here is the final correction of your work. It would be a good idea to use use some expressions of sympathy in your introduction, such as ’I felt very sorry/ sad // I was moved to tears when I read your letter. Also, avoid lifting of phrases from the rubric, e.g. ’plan your time better’. One important rubric item thay you missed to cover is encouraging your friend not to give up, possibly by stating benefits of getting a diploma.

Dear Dea,

I am not surprised because starting something new is very hard.You didn’t give me enough information about your problems, but I will try to help you.
You wrote me that there are so many things to do and I didn’t understand whether you think of your college or your personal life. You must try to organise your activities more efficiently. What do you think about making a to-do list for each day? Also, it is very important to pay attention to/in classes. It is very good because you don’t have to study too much at home and teachers like quiet students.You should discuss studying problems with your teachers.Then they will see that you are interested in classes and subjects. If you can’t study in the house I suggest you should go to the library. It is the best place for studying.You said that you don’t have money.Why don’t you find a holiday job? It’s not so hard and you’ll get enough money to spend on yourself.
Write me soon. I wish you all the best.

Yours,
Katarina