Final T's Correction of Formal Letter 1 by P.Milicevic

- Peđa, it seems you did not understand that the job refers to working as a tour guide in your area.
- It would be a good idea to make your sentence structures more diverse by avoiding to start almost each of them with ’I’. You could do this by combining two simpler sentences into a more complex one, for which you can use appropriate linkers and/or participle clauses.


Dear Sir/Madam,

I am interested in the summer jobs that are available in your agency. I would like to have the job, because I have the skills necessary for that kind of jobs and I am interested in meeting people from abroad.

I have worked in the tourist agency ’Balkanik’ for two years as a tourist guide and have travelled to many countries around the world: Egypt, Greece, India, Tunisia, Japan, USA, and Italy are some of them. My experience include work with all kinds of groups, both with older and younger people.
My English is excellent after learning it for ten years, and I have a Cambridge First Certificate. I also speak German and French.

I would like to travel with groups to Italy, especially Rome, because the city is full of ancient treasures that are very interesting for most of the people.

I would appreciate it very much if you considered my application.

Yours faithfully,

Predrag Milicevic