Final T's Correction of Formal Letter 1 by K.Mijatovic

Dear Mrs Malone,

I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I wanted to ask you to give me some details. I hope that you will think that I am the right person to help you.
I wonder if you could tell me what kind of help you exactly need. I have experience in working with children because I have a younger sister and I spend a lot of time playing with her.Furthermore, I think you should tell me how old your children are so that I could cooperate better with them. I am also interested in the date of your holiday and how many hours a day I will spend with your children. I would also be grateful if you could inform me about my pay.
I think my English is pretty good because I have studied it for nine years, so there will not be any difficulties in our communication. My wish to improve speaking skills will make it even easier.
I look forward to your reply.


Yours sincerely,
Kristina Mijatovic