Final T's Correction of Informal Letter by K.Vicentijevic

Dear Velja,

In your last letter you said that you would like me to write you about an important family celebration from my childhood. I’ve decided to tell you something about my first New Year’s Eve with my friends. It wasn’t exactly with my family, but they had a big role in what happened to me.
It was very difficult to convince my parents to let me go to the Art hall with my friends, because they were afraid that something bad could happen to me. But in the end, they couldn’t resist my friend’s parents’ presure and they let me go.
When we got to the Art hall, at about 10 p.m, there were only ten people in the room. At first we thought that more people were about to arrive. An old-style band started playing and it was really boring. As time passed, we realised that our first New Years Eve was a disaster.
After that, we decided to go outside, and to be at the City square at 12 p.m. On our way to the City square, we met my parents and we told them what had happened. At first they laughed at us and then they told me to invite my friends to my house so that we coud have fun at the end of the night.
I did what they told me, and we had a really great time. I mean, in the end it wasn’t that bad. I hope that in the future I won’t be this “lucky”.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Katarina