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Wednesday, November 16, 2005

Final T's Correction of Report 1 by M. Markovic


Crime in Our Town



Introduction
The purpose of this report is to talk about crime in our town, some reasons for committing it and how we can make the number of crimes smaller.

Reasons for crime
In my opinion, most people who break laws are under the influence of drugs because if they do not have money for them they mug people or even worse – burgle houses. Alcohol is also a big problem. Drunken people can be very violent and can hurt other people, too.

Recommendations
I think that you should position police officers at many locations in town so that our enivornment becomes safer for living. Maybe today not many people have enough money for video cameras, but I think that we can put cameras in bigger shops or in some places where younger people go out in the evening so that they do not use alcohol or drugs.

Conclusion
Although crime is a big problem in our town, I believe we can cope with it and make our life safer by following the recommendations in this report.

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