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Wednesday, November 16, 2005

S's Correction: Report 1 by M.Markovic

The purpose of this report is to talk about criminal in our town, some reasons for committing it and how we can make the number of crimes smaller. In my opinion, most people who break laws are under the influence of drugs because if they don’t have money for it they can mug or even worst – burgle into houses. Alcohol is also a big problem. Drunken people can be very violent and can hurt other people, too. I think that you should put police officers at many locations in town so that our society becomes safer to live in. Maybe today many people doesn’t have much money for video cameras, but I think that we can put cameras in bigger shops or in some places where younger people go in the evening so that they do not use alcohol or drugs. At the end, I hope you would do something that would help us to live safer.

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