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Thursday, November 24, 2005

Final T's Correction of Crime Prevention Report by D.Ristovski

CRIME PREVENTION REPORT



The purpose of this report is to suggest reasons why our area is the main target of criminals.
This area is known as a poor area, with mainly Afro-american population. Statistics say that 93.4% of all inhabitants are Afro, and the rest are Indians. Due to bleak prospects for employment, there are many people who decide to become criminals, like muggers, shoplifters or burglars. They need money for normal life: food, clothes and a place where they can live.
Most of them are from 14 to 25 years old, and from this finding we can see that they are very young people.

I suggest that you should engage organizations or clubs who would educate young delinquents un different ways, such as setting up weekend camps in the province. I think it would help a lot, and there is nothing to lose.

Meanwhile, we need to install alarm systems in shops, big houses, buildings and other important public places. We need more monitoring which is the best way to catch criminals. Also, we must cooperate with the police department and help them in their activities since we know they are not responsible for all unresolved criminal cases.

The crime is on the increase, and we must think about our future and the future of those young people. I am sure that we can do it by following these recommendations.

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