This blog has been created to show teenager students that learning English can be fun. They will be given links to language games, opportunity to share project experiences, and some research and writing tasks.

Friday, December 29, 2006

Annotated Book Review by Stefan Radovanovic

CRY FREEDOM by John Briley

This story was created to show the world what life looked like in South Africa. While in the rest of the world black people were “black”, here they were still “colored” and forced to live in small and dirty houses in townships.
A proud, brave and energetic black leader, Steve Biko, is fighting against white men brutality and wants all the people in South Africa, black and white, to be equal and have the same rights. Donald Woods¹, a successful, friendly Englishman and editor of the “Daily Dispatch”, a famous newspaper there, tries to help Biko in his battle.
The story is mostly situated in East London in South Africa. It is a country well known by diamonds and gold but really poor when it comes to relationships between two societies.
That is what Biko and Donald are trying to change. Biko wants to show Donald all the suffering of his people and he takes him several times to Black Township, a few kilometers from the centre of the King William’s Town which is about 60 kilometers from East London. They also go to Zanempilo, where Biko has started a clinic only for black people, because they are not treated as they should be in other hospitals. But this is not easy as Biko is banned from leaving the old church in King William’s.
In order to help black people, Donald gives jobs to two Biko’s friends, but soon they are both imprisoned and one of them is beaten to death. The authorities try to break their friendship.
The situation gets more complicated and soon something happens to Biko and Donald has to fight alone. To make things worse, the police ban Donald and he must not leave South Africa nor print anything. He tries to escape from Africa in order to print some document but some unexpected things happen. Will he make it?
This book made me feel like I was right there with those people and realize what it was like. I think everyone should read this book and see the energy people can release when it comes to fighting for freedom, friends and family.

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NOTES
¹ Biographical Note on Donald Woods
Donald Woods was born in East London, South Africa. He studied law at the University of Cape Town. After becoming a cub reporter Donald eventually went to work for the Daily Dispatch newspaper in East London and later became the Editor-in-Chief of the Daily Dispatch. After Biko's death it became clear to Woods that his family was being targeted by the government, and he decided his family needed to leave South Africa to avoid the dangerous threats. Woods then devised a plan to be smuggled out of his house, and made his way to Lesotho disguised as an Irish Catholic priest. They later flew via Botswana to London. After arriving in London, Woods became an active spokesman against apartheid and a passionate advocate of nations imposing sanctions against South Africa. He toured the United States campaigning for sanctions against apartheid. Donald returned to South Africa in 1994. He was also awarded an Order of the British Empire. Director Richard Attenborough decided to make a film, titled Cry Freedom, about Donald Woods and Steve Biko, based upon the books which Woods had written.

Friday, December 01, 2006

Annotated Story Review by K.Vicentijevic


The Character of Aurelio Escovar in
One of These Days by Gabriel Garcia Marquez

All of us go to the dentist and there is nothing strange about it. But in the story “One of These Days” by Gabriel Garcia Marquez, a visit to the dentist becomes very odd when the dentist Aurelio Escovar refuses to answer the Mayor’s phone call.

Aurelio is the main reason why I loved this story. His resolution to fight against the corrupted Mayor is what makes me admire him more. He is a very direct person, he gives it to everyone straight from the shoulder and that is the reason why everybody in the town hates him, not only the Mayor.
Garcia Marquez gives very clear description of the Aurelio’s surgery. You can imagine the exact look of the surgery: “…an old wooden chair, the pedal drill, a glass case with ceramic bottles.” It tells you about Aurelio’s money situation. You would expect him to have a lot of money as every dentist in the world. But he is very poor, modest and an ordinary, sometimes strange man: “He was erect and skinny with a look that rarely corresponded situation, the way deaf people have of looking.”
The only thing I do not like about Aurelio is the fact that neither he is very honest himself. What’s more, he is a dentist without a degree. In spite of all that, I respect his dilligence and dedication to his work, even though he is sometimes obsessed with it.
The way Aurelio resolves the problem with the Mayor, who comes into his surgery, is, in a certain way, interesting. In order to find out what happens in the end, I recommend you to read the story.

Story Review Assignment


Dear Students,

Here is our new assignment*:

1. Read the story One of These Days by G.G.Marquez in pairs. Make notes during reading.
2. Discuss your notes and decide together what to include in your review. Go to
Literary Elements Map and agree which elements each of you will cover.
3. Look at this sample review, which also gives advice about writing reviews.
4. Don’t forget to express your opinion of the book/story and support it with explanations and
specific references to the book itself, including quotations, rather than give a brief description
of the book. Discuss your drafts and write the final review. Edit your review.
5. Annotate your review with hyperlinked reports on the author, the setting, character or
something else which is mentioned in your book. Illustrate your review with some pictures.
6. Reflect on your review. Think about what you liked and what you would do differently next
time. What kind of story are you going to read next time? Share your experience with the
whole class.

Yours,
Mira

*Adapted from Patrizia Shulze’s ''Book reviews, annotation, and web technology''